Friday, December 18, 2009

Energy firm shows Michigan can be a hotbed for enterprise

This is talking about how michigan is going to become really good to become the good thing. also i think that wthis cna use more information.

Wintry storm churns toward Northeast

This is talking about there are storms that are hading to the northeast. The cities and states are Washington; Baltimore, Maryland; and Philadelphia, Pennsylvania. It says in the article that Air travelers should arrive at the airport two hours before their scheduled departure, he said, and auto travelers should take precautions. "If you're traveling by car, map out where you're going, have good directions, and let the people know when you expect to arrive and what route you're taking." I think that this can use less information and talk more about why it isn't hitting other sates that are surronding those states.

Wednesday, December 16, 2009

the 2009 national book awards and Three Smart Things About the Vacuum of Space

this is talking about all the books in 2009 that were the top most sellers. Also there was ceremony returned to Cipriani Wall Street in downtown Manhattan. It was November 18 for the second year. I think that it can use more information on what books won the awards and less pictures.

This article is talking about the different stages of the space vacuum. The stages are 1 It varies, 2 Apollo astronauts were exposed to it, 3 It wouldn’t kill you right away. i think this is an itresting topic to talk about because many people want to know more about space. I think that this can use more information about space and less about the stages.

Thursday, December 3, 2009

"The Snow Machine Pummeled Through the White-Dusted Plain like a Jubilant Beaver"

This is about Sarah Palin's best-selling new memoir, Going Rogue,.we asked Slate readers to submit sentences that captured Palin's unique style of writing. We received more than 700 entries, the best of which combined pastoral lyricism ("the soft periwinkle glow of the Alaskan morning") with unlikely metaphors ("The snow machine pummeled through the white-dusted plain like a jubilant beaver") and an adventurous approach to the English language. I think that athis can use more information and talk less about how people want to talk about sarah plain.